Tuesday, 21 March 2017

Poster Changes

As i changed my film poster to a portrait, here i have used a different picture which is more effective than the other film poster i had produced i feel as through the writing really fits in with my poster and engages the audience. 





Monday, 27 February 2017

3rd draft of film review

This is my 3rd draft for my film review, i have changed my layout of my film review and i also changed the software i had done it on. I have done this 3rd draft on photoshop and found it looks more sharp and professional. I think the typography fits in with documentary makes the documentary look more mysterious.                                                                                                                                                                                                                          


Monday, 20 February 2017

Documentary - 3rd draft

This is my third draft, in this i have re-shot my interview scene to make it look more professional in a studio. I have also changed the actor as i found that my teacher suited my documentary the most as she was wearing more efficient clothes that matched the mise en scene. Also i have cut my documentary down a lot to make it look more snappy and tight as some scenes were to long and could become boring for the audience.  In this edit i have also cut down the shots that were shaky as this not look good from audiences point of view.

Improvements -


  • Add voiceover, over the narrative to add more meaning to the visuals on scene 
  • Add recording symbol over the scene with immy so it looks like she is recording a youtube video
  • Cut down background noise 


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